Wednesday 25 September 2013

I think my ((NEW)) favorite type of poetry ((FOR NOW)) is abstract lyric poetry; from Sillimans definition and examples anyways! The post he made on Thursday, November 14, 2002 (WOWIE THATS A WHILE AGO!!)
informed me all about it! Its interesting Sillimans definition of it was "... abstract lyric – “bounded by modest scale and focused on the elements within”. To the simpler mind (me) this is kinda confusing without examples! GOOD THING HE PROVIDED SOME!! An example of this was
walking

      the idea of dancing

             time

                       making room

This untitled piece from The World and Its Streets, Places (Black Sparrow, 1977) !!

that's really neat! you should read up on some abstract lyric poetry too!

Now i'm going to take a crack at it yeah see how I do.


interesting
            time

                   walking
                    exploring


!!!

I tried! I really did!

Cool Neat DNA POETRY!!

Christian Bok's project on poetry and DNA is an interesting four year project where Bok has created only 2 poems over the projects time period because he created them with a computer to be "written" in bacteria. "...only the opening lines have been published — “any style of life / is prim…” for the first; and “the faery is rosy / of glow…” for the second.." says the article!!! The thing didn't all work though. BUT, he did create the worlds first microbial critic! Which is awesome.
So basically the dude is starting something new and fresh AND artsy! Which is actually really cool! The article says that Bok probably isn't the first to make a breakthrough using bacteria and stuff but his usage of the "poetic protein  is a step forward towards new types of information storage!
probably!

Analizin' dem poems

[hist whist]
hist      whist
little ghostthings
tip-toe
twinkle-toe

little twitchy
witches and tingling
goblins
hob-a-nob     hob-a-nob

little hoppy happy
toad in tweeds
tweeds
little itchy mousies

with scuttling
eyes    rustle and run     and
hidehidehide
whisk

whisk     look out for the old woman
with the wart on her nose
what she’ll do to yer
nobody knows

for she knows the devil     ooch
the devil     ouch
the devil
ach     the great

green
dancing
devil
devil

devil
devil

        wheeEEE
E.E Cummings poem "[hist whist]" makes me visualize what he is talking about and  even maybe what the things would be thinking, "...little ghostthings tip-toe twinkle-toe..." puts the reader in the little ghostlings mind for a split second, the reader can almost relate to the words in a strange way. I also get the feeling that the poem probably takes place on either devils night or Halloween or at least that's what it reminds me of! It just has that spoopy feel to it, creepy but cute because it talks about goblins and other things! I actually like it because the paseing and what they did with the spacing, it makes the reader either read the words quickly or stop to read the next line. It gives a sort of unruly feel to the poem, which adds to the spoopy feel!

[in Just-]

in Just-
spring          when the world is mud-
luscious the little
lame balloonman

whistles          far          and wee

and eddieandbill come
running from marbles and
piracies and it's
spring

when the world is puddle-wonderful

the queer
old balloonman whistles
far          and             wee
and bettyandisbel come dancing

from hop-scotch and jump-rope and

it's
spring
and

         the

                  goat-footed

balloonMan          whistles
far
and
wee

E.E Cummings "[in Just-]"  makes me think about a kite on a moderately windy day, its swoopy, and swishy, a good kite flying day. So it reminds me of a windy spring day through a child's mind maybe? Not sure. I also tend to like this one because of its strange innocence. I feel that in some contexts though I would find the "balloonMan" kinda creepy because I would think of a spectral being or a spirit. I think i also like it because i related it to being told a story through a child's reasoning of things, and even though some things seem a little off beat and the spacing and stuff help that part in this poem as well! 

from Cabbage Gardens

The past
will overtake   
alien force   
our house   
formed
of my mind   
to enter
explorer
in a forest   
of myself
for all
my learning   
Solitude
quiet
and quieter   
fringe
of trees
by a river
bridges black   
on the deep   
the heaving sea   
a watcher stands
to see her ship   
winging away   
Thick noises
merge in moonlight   
dark ripples   
dissolving
and
defining
spheres
and
snares

             Place of importance as in the old days
stood on the ramparts of the fort
                                                 the open sea outside   
alone with water-birds and cattle
                        knee-deep in a stream
grove of reeds
               herons watching from the bank
henges
      whole fields honeycombed with souterrains   
human
                        bones through the gloom
       whose sudden mouth
surrounded my face
                      a thread of blue around the coast   
                                                         feathery moon   
eternity swallows up time
                                     peaceable as foam
                        O cabbage gardens
summer’s elegy

Susan Howes "from Cabbage Gardens" made me think of memories flashing by, like the reader was getting a look through the poems memory's or something! I sort of also get kinda a lonely feel as well. Maybe some nostalgia? Just thinkin' bout those cabbage gardens, takes me back, to the way things used to be... I enjoyed this poem actually, I like the faster paced poems because they give me better visuals, this poem is fast and feel I zoomed through the fields and streams.

from Hinge Picture

“Crawl in,” said the witch, “and see if it’s hot enough to put the bread in.”
—Hansel and Gretel

All roads lead to rooms. 
—Irish Proverb
a stark
                  Quake

               a numb
                  Calm

                      *

               clutching my Crumbl
               ejumble
                  among
               Tombs and
               in Caves
                  my
                Dream
                Vision

               Oarsman, oarsman,
                  Where have you been?
               I’ve been to Leafy,
               I’ve dismembered the Queen.

               Oarsman, oarsman
                  What did you there?
               I hid in a cleft,
               I braided the air.


hearing our oars where their freed goatsteps sped   
and are silent
by an extinct river
O Babylon when I lay down
alert for sliding cataracts
where in corridors the print of dancing feet   
beyond poise I am prey
posing in snow-light
being of human form
clothed in the scales of a fish

Count him a magician
he controls the storm
walked on the sea shouting   
that he is the Logos of God
that he is the Word original and first begotten
attended by power
upheld by his mother
(a very active gesturing baby)   
what if Simon Peter Jesus himself   
walked among the cold stone faces
shouting NIKA
emptyeyed blanksmiling


                            Swiftness divination these false gods
                            their commerce is the cloud
                            so they can learn what is preparing in the sky   
                            Artificer of the universe
                            Magician who controls the storm
                            to see you in one spot
                            I count the clouds others count the seasons   
                            Dreaming of archipelagos and the desert   
                            I have lived through weeks of years
                            I have raked up fallen leaves for winter   
                            after winter across an empire of icy light

Light of our dark is the fruit of my womb
or night falling through the reign of splashes   
Liquid light that bathes the landscape in my figure   
Clairvoyant Ireland
eras and eras encircled by sea
the barrows of my ancestors have spilled their bones   
across the singing ear in hear or shell   
as wreck or wrack may be in daring   
There were giants on the earth in those days   
feasts then on hill and fort
All night the borders of my bed
carve paths across my face
and I always forget to leave my address   
frightened by the way that midnight
grips my palm and tells me that my lines   
are slipping out of question

Divorce I manumission round
with a gentle blow the casting branch
my right hand My covenant
was garment concealed or mask or matron
Proceed with measured step   
the field and action of the law   
Like day the tables twelve   
whip torch and radiate halo   
Sky brewing coming storm   
Faraway over the hill
when Hell was harrowed
and earth was brought to heel   
how the hills spread away   
how the walls crumbled   
deathcolored frozen in time
Where was the senate   zone and horizon
Where are the people   mountain of light to the east   
Tell them I sail for the deep sea rest
a painless extraction a joyful day   
bird of passage over all I love   
Goodbye to all the little fir trees   
of the future

               far   off    in    the    dread
               blindness    I   heard   light
               eagerly   I   struck   my foot
               against    a      stone      and
               raised    a    din    at    the
               sound    the   blessed    Paul
               shut   the   door   which   had
               been   open   and   bolted   it

Susan Howes "Hinge Picture" made me think of grass and horses and crazy weather. The timing of the paragraphs shift and speed and slow, from the beginning towards the end. I thought we were getting a story about a man trying to hide in a storm or a war, and near the end I figured it might be a story about life and death and new hopes or lack of. NOT SURE but that's what I got out of it. 

Linton Kwesi Johnson's poem "sence outta nonsence" Is talking about how our reliance on the government and the sillys who run our country makes us fools and we pay the price instead of them! I think anyways. The fool is cho. I really enjoy Linton's poetry, it forces you to think about the wording and helps you think about the rhythm of the words. everything seems very well planed out but in a subtle way.  I enjoy basically every poem ive read from him, he has a real feel to his words, and its easy to relate to his stuff. He gives us his honesty and I enjoy that!


Linton Kwesi Johnson's poem "Time Come" makes me think about crooked government officials and how eventually not just a few people will be affected by it. Hes saying that he warned us, and you get a feeling that he knows and has been through or seen certain people go through stuff. I like this guy. I like him hes cool. Also again his word choices again make you think harder about the content of what he is saying and sometimes makes you read it twice. It fits better in my mind than other stuff. Its good. Aww yis.